THE BEAUTIFUL SHEEN
There it was: the blue porpoise
lying among the trash on 4th Avenue.
I could picture it splashing
in our inflatable pool, leaping between
high-rises—its beautiful sheen
bright as a beacon light. But for all
my enthusiasm, its slick skin
made carrying it home impossible.
So I brought Pui red roses instead—
she thanked me but in her heart
must have wished I had demonstrated
a more imaginative touch. “I wanted
to bring back a blue porpoise.” “Oh honey,”
she said, stroking my cheek, “of course you did.”
THE LITTLE GIRL GIVES ME A DRAWING
“It’s not a horse, it’s a sea otter.”
Makes absolute sense—
I’m more a sea otter type
than a horse, I think.
She tells me she wanted
to add fish and gulls
but she lost the red crayon
and decided to keep it simple.
“Those eyes are your eyes,”
she says—and they are:
intense baby blues.
The sea otter, I tell her,
never looked happier
and that I’m hanging it
in my study, on the gray wall,
beside the Memento poster—
‘Wine for a Healthy Heart’.
When I say: “One day
this drawing will be a masterpiece,”
she says: “What’s a masterpiece?”—
the attitude capable of making it so,
so in old age I can strut around
in hope and reliable shoes—
my pockets stuffed with cash,
as rich as she will be beautiful.
Tim Suermondt is the author of TRYING TO HELP THE ELEPHANT MAN DANCE
( The Backwaters Press, 2007) and JUST BEAUTIFUL coming from NYQ Press in the Fall of 2010. He has published work in Poetry, The Georgia Review, New South, Southern Poetry Review, Poetry East, Bellevue Literary Review and Poetry Northwest, among others. He lives in Brooklyn with his wife, the poet Pui Ying Wong.
I particularly, admire “THE BEAUTIFUL SHEEN”
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“The Beautiful Sheen” is a joy to read !
Kudos to Tim Suermondt for “The Beautiful Sheen”.
I love the humor and sly tone at the end of “The Beautiful Sheen.”
Tim Suermondt demonstrates the art of penetrating whimsy in these lovable poems. And what finer image than a blue porpoise going from the trash to an inflatable pool?